posted by Sara .
We are working on descriptive writing and right now I have to do a whole description on a Old House.
Touch: slimy doorknob
Sights: broken steps
Spider webs on door
Colours: Brown door
Comparisons: The damaged rooftop looks like an exploded volcano?
Could you please add a few more to each list; I really need help with the comparisons. Also, is there more to descriptive writing other than these senses, and comparisons.
You have an excellent start, Sara.
Once proud as a courtesan; now dejected as a prostitute
Laughter of children now replaced by the sighs of their ghosts
My grandmother's pride; my mother's home; my albatross
This site may give you more ideas about descriptive writing.
Thank you Ms. Sue, you are very supportive :-)
You're very welcome, Sara.