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He went back to room and he saw his father didn't woke up. He wrote this stuff and went to sleep again. Eddie gave them a Chinese banquet at the hotel to them in China. They ate Chinese food. After eating Alex went to room and wrote something in his journal and went to sleep. Next morning he went to Great Wall of China. He thinks Lao Xu is amazing guy who knows everything about China. Lao Xu told Alex about very interesting thinglike he told him about PLA army.

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    He went back to room and he saw his father hadn't waked up. He wrote this stuff and went to sleep again. Eddie gave them a Chinese banquet at the hotel in China. They ate Chinese food. After eating Alex went to their room and wrote something in his journal and went to sleep. Next morning he went to the Great Wall of China. He thinks Lao Xu is an amazing guy who knows everything about China. Lao Xu told Alex about very interesting things like the PLA army.

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