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Can you help me express these two sentences in a better way?
1) He thought that men are divided into a part of good and a part of pure evil and he wanted to separate them
2) The American Civil Rights M. fought with demonstrations against the laws of social segregation and for the rights of black people and their equality with white????

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    1. Are you trying to say that he saw people as either good or evil? No possibility of each person having both good and evil tendencies?

    2. The American Civil Rights movement included demonstrations against the laws of social segregation and for equality of all people, black and white. <~~??

    Let me know what you think.

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