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this is the start of my second body paragraph, how can i expand it by putting examples?


Some people believe that empire expansion is another way to protect a nations culture and religion by expanding, oppressing other cultures. But by expanding you leave your culture and religion vulnerable by being introduced to new cultures as you expand, people converting to different religions.

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    Use examples from Alexander's, Caesar's, and Gengis Khan's empires.

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    What did the Crusades do to the Holy Land?

    What about the invasion of the Moors into Spain?

    What about the German invasion of Western Europe?

    What about Cortez moving into Mexico?

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    1.I understand Dr. Maurice hired a new nurse. What is her name?

    2. I understand Dr. Maurice hired a new nurse. What is his or her name?

    WHICH ONE OF THESE SENTENCES IS CORRECT?

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    Please post a new question.

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