Literature
posted by mysterychicken .
Does this sentence make sense?
My backyard is a haven of peace.
Or, My backyard is a haven of peace for me.
Which one should I use for my observational essay?
Thanks
MC

I would use "seems" as opposed to "is". Other than that, the sentence is great.

So..my backyard seems as a haven of peace to me?
MC 
My backyard seems a peaceful haven to me. <G>
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