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I tried to make it better Ms. Sue, please tell me if I have missed anything,thanks.

I am feeling really weak. I can neither walk nor crouch in this condition. I’m stuck in a chimney and will be forever. My arms and legs are badly burned. I am partly bruised and scraped everywhere. I have third degree burns, and will die any minute.

  • Socials-Ms. Sue -

    Sara -- of course you can't walk. You're stuck in a chimney that is a half to one metre square.

    Also -- wouldn't a child complain about the extreme pain of the burns. He wouldn't know -- or care -- whether they were first, second or third degree burns.

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