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ok. how's this so far for an outline:

1. vacation spots - broad subject
2. Asheville, North Carolina - limited topic for thesis statement
3. Asheville is a fun and relaxing place to visit - Main Idwa about This Topic
4. -river, -picnic spots, -ice-cream parlor
- Three-Step Format for Thesis Statement
5. Asheville, North Carolina is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of it's refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors.

so far so good?

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    See my previous answers.

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    Nope....The thesis statement that MsSue suggested would be a good one. Or, choose three things that you particularly enjoy doing there. You might begin your essay by saying " Winter always brings memories of my favorite summer vacation area." Then go from there.

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    Asheville, North Carolina - topic for thesis statement
    Asheville is a fun and relaxing place to visit -
    Main Idwa about This Topic
    -river, -picnic spots, -ice-cream parlor
    - Three-Step Format for Thesis Statement
    5. Asheville, North Carolina is a fun and relaxing place to visit because of it's refreshing river, beautiful picnic spots, and various ice-cream parlors.

    This works out very well.

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    wait..so what i wrote is ok GurubLue?

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    because i don't think you guys understand what i have to do

    if you're saying that Asheville is the broad topic, then i have to pick a narrower topic and find supports for THAT.

    it will be easy for me to write the way i organized it..

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    Y -- do you want the easy way -- or the way you'll learn most, as suggested by two experienced English teachers?

    Your choice!

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