To MS SUE
posted by sara .
''Without the English civil war, democracy would have never developed.'' No one would have been able to asert changes at all. No one would have been able to make their own decisions/rights. Everything would have happened accordingly by king, and the king would have made decisions regarding his own life. He would only do things for his own benefit. With the occurance of this English war, people have the right to judge.
is this good? Oh and Ms. Sue I don't really like my ending where it ends with judge, can you please help me change that ending, thanks
. . . people now have the right to make their own decisions
yes, thanks you so much Ms. Sue you are the best:-)
Ms. Sue do think this is good?
Yes. It's good. You've corrected the run-on sentences. :-)
thank you Ms. Sue you are number 1 and will always be for me:-)