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for my research paper on Diet and Diabetes, i have to think of a thesis statement

thesis: Diet and Diabetes are two things that go side by side and highly impact each other


is that ok. i don't think it's detailed enough. it's mostly my opinion, and not really an argument. can someone pleeeease help me improve my thesis statemnt, this way i'll also have an idea of what to argue in my paper.
thanks

  • n&w -

    You should state how Diet and Diabetes impact each other. Stating that they impact each other is very broad.

    For example, you could write something along the lines of "diet controls the onset of diabetes."

  • n&w -

    ...ok i will try my best to think of something more narrow.
    thanks for your help though

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