Thesis Statement

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Is this thesis OK for my schizophrenia essay?
Schizophrenia is a severe mental illness that deeply affects the patient's daily life

Thanks
-MC

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    That's a factual statement, not a thesis statement. You should not delete anything; all you need to do is add your own position or stance or opinion and maybe do a little rephrasing.

    Here are examples of thesis statements to help you:
    http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

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    I read the first one which tells the difference between a factual and thesis statement but I'm having a little writers block :P
    Any suggestions on how I can rephrase this or what I need to add? I don't have an opinion on this topic...
    -MC

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    If you don't have an opinion, what are you going to write? Just a report?

    If you're supposed to be writing an essay (or research paper), you need to have a topic about which you have an opinion; otherwise, you cannot take and defend your position.

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    If you're still stuck about the topic, try this:
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    Steps 1 and 2 seem to be what you need help with now.

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    Alright, thanks
    -MC

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    schizophrenia

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    this is to much to read u suck but thanks for wasting my time

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    You don't defend your position in a ressearch paper. You simply explain what you learned...the facts, no opinions.

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