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You are on vacation in Paris, describe each attraction you visited.

Can someone please check my work?

Eiffel Tower
The queue to get up the Tower was enormous, but, after an ice cream, I decided to go up. After 30 minutes of waiting in line, I managed to catch the lift. At the top of the Tower the view was breathtaking, you could see very far. I got some great pictures.

Tour Eiffel
La file (to get up) la Tour a été énorme, mais, après une glace, j'ai décidé (to go up). Après 30 minutes d'attente en ligne, j'ai géré rattraper l'ascenseur. Au sommet de la tour, la vue était à couper le souffle, vous avez pu voir très loin. (I took) quelques remarquable photos.
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The Louvre
This is the world's greatest art museum—and the largest, with representative examples from almost every civilization on earth. In addition to Leonardo da Vinci's eternally inscrutable Mona Lisa, you can see works by virtually every major pre-20th-century Western painter.

Le Louvre
C'est le meilleur Musée d'art et de la plus grande, avec des exemples représentatifs de presque toutes les civilisations sur terre. En plus de Leonardo da Vinci's infame Mona Lisa, on peut voir des œuvres de presque tous les grands pré-20e siècle Western peintre.

If there are any errors in my writing please correct me.

Merci Beaucoup!!

  • French -

    pour aller en haut
    je me suis décidé à aller
    j'ai géré rattraper = WAY too literal
    J'ai pu monter dans l'ascenseur
    la vue était superbe (try another adjective)
    et on peut voir
    J'ai pris ...remarquables (if noun is plural, so are all adjectives)

    et de la plus grande = et le plus grand (musée = masc.)
    word order = En plus de Mona Lisa éternellement inscrutable de Leonardo da Vinci, on peut, etc.
    toutes les grandes oeuvres des peintres occidentals avant le vingtième siècle = or something like that.

    Sorry, I can't do any more; I have sick dogs.

    Sra (aka Mme)

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