Misplaced Modifiers or Parallel Structure

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I have another sentence to fix.

....so why do women believe they must show their physical attributes to gain contron rather than their intelligence.

how should I re-write this sentence?

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    Why do women believe they must use their physical attributes rather than their intelligence in order to gain control?

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