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Can you correct my metaphor poem pleease

My room is a natural disaster
When you walk in you think
there was an earthquake

The bed is always undone
Pillows piled higher than a hill
The door is higher than a mountain.

The floor is a swamp
With games, toys, books, papers, & clothes.

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    Clever poem!


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