narrative poem
John and Fred are the awesomest friends
They hang all day everyday
They do homework together
They don't ever fight
A girl named Isabel is new at their school
She is funny and fun
She is sweet and beautiful
They both really like her
Soon they were fighting for her
They soon became no longer friends
They had fought the first time
Running from each other and being mean
They didn't stop for a long time
Until they saw she liked someone else
The tall brown-haired boy woth dark brown eyes
Who both despised for being a jerk
Soon they both saw how bad they've been
They are too good of friends to fight over this
It wasn't worth ruining everything it did
Which taught them a valuable lesson
They both were embarrassed for what they did
Their fight was a silly mistake
Their friendship is too valuable
And destroying it was a loss
They are tight friends again.
-------CAN YOU CORRECT MY POEM PLEASE TO SEE IF IT IS A GOOD NARRATIVE POEM? THANK YOU!
It has a good moral! You might look at th is line one more time:
Who both despised for being a jerk
It should be Whom both despised, etc.
Sra
And I don't believe "awesomest" is really a word!! To use "most awsome" would work fine.
Your poem is indeed a good example of a narrative poem. It tells a story with characters and events that unfold over time. The poem narrates the friendship between John and Fred, their falling out over a girl named Isabel, and their eventual realization that their friendship outweighs any romantic interests. Here's the corrected version of your poem:
John and Fred are the best of friends,
They hang out every single day,
They do their schoolwork side by side,
And they never let it get in the way.
But then a girl named Isabel arrived,
She was funny, kind, and so pretty,
Both John and Fred fell head over heels,
For the girl who made their hearts feel giddy.
Soon, they found themselves in a battle,
Fighting for Isabel's affection,
Their friendship was put to the test,
And it suffered from their fierce competition.
The fights went on for quite some time,
Running, hiding, and being unkind,
Until they realized their mistake,
And left their rivalry behind.
They saw Isabel's heart belonged to another,
A tall boy with dark eyes and brown hair,
They both despised him for being a jerk,
But losing their friendship was too much to bear.
They felt so foolish for what they had done,
Their fight was just a silly mistake,
Their friendship was far too precious,
And losing it was a price too great to take.
Now, they stand hand in hand once more,
Their bond stronger than it was before,
The lessons they learned will serve them well,
And they'll cherish their friendship forevermore.
Overall, your narrative poem effectively tells the story of John and Fred's friendship and their journey of realizing the importance of their bond.