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There once was a boy named Timmy.

His brothers were all named Jimmy.
They all got confused.
This name was misused.
They all ganged up and beat Timmy.

Is it right poem for limeric check my spelling too thanks.

  • poem -

    There once was a boy named Timmy.
    His brothers were all named Jimmy.
    They all got confused.
    This name<~~which name? was misused.
    They all ganged up and beat Timmy.

    The meter and rhyme are fine.

  • poem -

    DO I have to change it

  • poem -

    You need to make it clear if "This name" refers to Timmy or Jimmy!!

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