posted by Nabiha .
i have to write a poem about 'your expression of the vastness of space/universe as a poem.
i have all the ideas in my head about the universe being incredibly vast. but im rubbish at writing poems. Can anyone help or find a useful website that has a poem about this task??
You could set it up as an acrostic, but make it poetic.
or another word that fits; then make each letter the first in each line.
Another way is to make a diamante.
i have decided to go with a normal poem, is this good enough??
I look up into eternal Space,
O' the vastness of it all,
But the vastness of 'Space' within me,
Makes outer space seem so small.
From Earth I glared at the twinkling stars,
And the sun that lit my way,
But here is a different atmosphere, There is darkness every day.
O'the Space that is within me,
Is so lonely and so cold,
Everything is bigger than me,
What vast emptiness I behold.
As I float in this incredible galaxy,
The Sun lies ahead me,
Like a huge ball of fire in the distance,
I feel so tiny from what I could see.
Do I need any improvements or have I said anything that doesnt make sense. If so is there any way 2 make it betta?