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does this make sense and is the grammar right? it is trying to say :
last weekend i went ice skating at queens in kensington with my friends. i celebrated my 16th birthday and it was very fun. i enjoyed it with my friends and family all weekend. i received many gifts and ate a lot of cake. my friends slept over and we watched movies.

el fin de semana pasado fui patinaje de hielo en las queens en kensington con mis amigas. celebré mi dieciséis cumpleaños y es muy divertido. disfrute con mis amigos y mi familia todo el fin de semana. recibí muchos regalos y comí mucha torta. mis amigas dumieron en mi casa y auxiliamos películas.
thanks!

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    Don't forget to capitalize the beginning of each sentence!

    El fin, etc....fui a patinar (I went to sky)..en Queens en Kensington, etc. Celebré mi cumpleaños de dieciséis (do you know about the Quinceañera that Spanish-speaking girls celebrate?) y fue (past tense) muy divertido. Lo disfruté... (there's a great verb "to have fun" which is "divertirse" = Me divertí mucho... Recibi... Mis amigas.....y miramos (we watched/looked at) unas películas.

    Sra

  • spanish -

    Presta atencion a la senora y no olvide las letras mayusculas cuando conmienza una oracion y use nombres propios.

  • spanish -

    last weekend i went ice skating at queens in kensington with my friends. i celebrated my 16th birthday and it was very fun. i enjoyed it with my friends and family all weekend. i received many gifts and ate a lot of cake. my friends slept over and we watched movies.
    El fin de semana pasado fui a patinar con mis amigos a Queens en Kensington.
    Celebre mis dulces 16 y me diverti mucho. Recivi muchos regalos y comi mucho pastel. Mis amigas se quedaron a dormir y vimos peliculas.

  • spanish -

    El fin de semana pasado fui a patinar con mis amigos a Queens en Kensington.
    Celebre mis dulces 16 y me diverti mucho. Recivi muchos regalos y comi mucho pastel. Mis amigas se quedaron a dormir y vimos peliculas.

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