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i'm writing an inverted intro paragraph and these are the sentences i have so far.

1. ?
2. giving back to the community
3. community service
4. the youth volunteering
5. benefits of youth volunteering for commuity service

can anyone think of a beginning sentence or make changes to make it better?

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    Anna, none of those are sentences.

    Since I think that your topic is "why youth should volunteer", then the first sentence should be something to grab attention.

    Something like - Would you like to have 50 pets, work with 20 future ElRons, have a dozen mentally challenged best friends? If your answer is "yes to any of these, then there are places where you can volunteer.

    Then you can use your above ideas to complete your first paragraph.

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    oh yeah i know they arent sentences. they are just ideas for the sentences. but they have to be in inverted order and i need a topic broader than giving back to the community.

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    Anna, what do you want your essay to be about?

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