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Topic is It has been said that computers are taking over our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

Please help with the following thesis statements I wrote for the topic.

Computers make terrific business parters.

Our lives depend on computers for our everyday needs.

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    Either of those will make a great thesis statement.

    Next do some jotting. Think of how lives were before computors...and give a very brief history. This will be your introduction to your first paragraph.
    Then think of three reason why computers make terrific business partners or three reasons why our lives depend on computers. These will be the basis for your supporting paragraphs.
    If you need further suggestions, after you have done some writing, please repost.

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