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posted by rose- Ms. Sue .
Create a thesis statement for your research paper:
My topic is: The price of food is leading the rise of inflation in today's economy.
My thesis statement:
The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in inflaion in developing countries.
How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments?
My topic will be supported by extensive research results from organizations such as the United Nations and the world economic consult who revealed startling statistic that support my compelling argument
This is much better. :-)