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Can you check my essay and correct it please ? this is my first essay ever in spanish, my classmates has done it for 2 years but as i moved from denmark to england, i had to do spansish, so help me please.


No llevé uniforme escolar en Dinamarca cuál me adore mucho porque usted comprar sus propias ropas y expresar su propio estilo.
cuando iba al colegio en Dinamarca, normalmente usaba vaqueros azul, una camisa, una blusa y deportivas blancas.

En este momente, llevo uniforme escolar. El uniforme se parece a esto: pantalones negro o griz soso y ajustado, una camisa azul, una corbata azul con rayas, una blusa azul soso y una blazer80. No esta muy ajua y no me gusta el uniforme porque es muy aburido y feo! En mi colegio, las chicas llevan un jersey azulmarina, una falta negro y una camisa azul. Lo bueno que tiene uniforme escolar es que muestra clase y personas no son intimidadas a causa de su estilo de ropas que es una cosa muy bien. Cuándo llego a casa, me mudo de ropa inmediatamente a vaqueros negro o azul, una camiseta y un jersey. Muy ajua y muy sexy !

En el futuro querría a llemé las ropas de mí en colegio en vez de unirfome porque es muy faboloso y confortable y muy ajua mientras que el uniforme escolar es muy feo y sencillo. Pero no pienso el código de vestido cambiará, pero no tengo un problema con llevar uniforme escolar en el futuro

  • spanish -

    I can only use one finger tonight after hand surgery.

    line 1 = lo cual me gusta
    2 = se compra su propia ropa y expresa
    3 =Cuando

    paragraph 2 = momento
    line 2= negros o grises sosos y ajustados
    3 = sosa to modify blusa...sorry. too painful

    Sra

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    Thanks for helping me (:
    I hope you can correct some more when your hand is okay ;)

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