english - idea on how to conclude a paragraph?

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My introductory sentence is this:
My least favourite musical performer is none other than the princess of pop herself, Britney Spears, otherwise affectionately known as Brit Brit in some blogging communities.
I talk about some of her 'wild antics' in the paragraph but I'm not sure how to end the final sentence. This is for grade 12 english. Thanks so much.

You could express what a shame it is that someone who started out successfully as a Mousketeer has turned out as she has in such a relatively short time.

http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/entertainment/6127298.stm?ls

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