posted by louise .
I woul like to review my essay please?
Can you please help me write that essay" A way to decrease your chance of becoming a victim of random ciolence".
Hmmm. You have an assignment to write an essay, a teacher offers to review your essay, and you respond asking the teacher to "help" write it.
Nuts to that.
We will be happy to critique your work. We can offer corrections, suggestions, and advice. But no writing.
advice from a 9th grade AP english student:
brainstorm and write down direct answers to the prompt. then slowly develop it into tellin the main gist of each paragraph or go downstairs grab ur favorite soda and sit around and think. second option is what I usually do :).