Please proofread my essay
posted by Soly .
Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis.
Here is my prompt:
1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a timeline for it.
*I really couldn't find a timeline, the only thing I got close to a timeline is 2025, but its not for the accomplishment.
Why Should The U.S. Cut Back On Oil Dependency?