Please proofread my essay

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Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis.

Here is my prompt:

1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a timeline for it.

*I really couldn't find a timeline, the only thing I got close to a timeline is 2025, but its not for the accomplishment.


Why Should The U.S. Cut Back On Oil Dependency?

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