Identify your relationship with the person you are writing to.
• Identify what you are asking of this person.
• Identify the emotion you feel toward the person you are writing to.
• Include at least 12-15 lines.
Grading Criteria: EFFORT and COMPLETION
Consider adding:
• 2 similes ("like two starts")
1 sight imagery ("burning up")
1 symbol ("stealing sun")
• 1 purposeful slang ("slash with me")
1 purposeful grammar mistake ("i am empty")
Hey, bro,
I hope this message finds you well. I know it's been a while since we've talked, but I really need your help. I'm going through a rough patch right now, and I could use some advice or just someone to listen. You've always been like a big brother to me, and I know I can count on you.
I feel this knot in my stomach every time I think about reaching out to you. It's like a weight on my chest that just won't go away. I feel lost and confused, like I'm wandering in the dark without a flashlight. I know you've been through tough times before, and I was hoping you could help me navigate through this storm.
Life has been throwing curveballs at me left and right, and I feel like I'm barely keeping my head above water. I need someone to talk to, someone who can help me make sense of it all. I feel like I'm drowning in my own thoughts, and I just need a life raft to keep me afloat.
I remember the days when we used to laugh and joke around, like two stars burning up in the night sky. I miss those moments when everything felt right in the world. I wish we could go back to those simpler times, when our biggest worry was what video game to play next.
So, bro, I'm asking you to slash with me through this jungle of emotions and doubts. I know I can't do it alone, and I trust you to be by my side. I know I'm not perfect, and I've made mistakes along the way, but I hope you can look past them and see the person who is reaching out to you now.
I am empty without your presence in my life, and I hope you can find it in your heart to lend me your strength and wisdom. I promise to be there for you when you need me, just like you've always been there for me. Let's steal the sun from the sky and light up our path together.
Thank you for reading this, bro. I hope you know how much you mean to me, and how grateful I am for your friendship and support. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Take care,
[Your Name]