Kayla writes the following claim I think school should be only four days a week and one to two cents to determine why this claim needs to be revised then write a claim about the topic that you could support with reasons in an argumentative essay
Claim: "I think school should be only four days a week and one to two cents."
Revision: "I believe schools should consider shifting to a four-day school week to enhance student learning and well-being, supported by careful consideration of financial implications."
Revised claim for an argumentative essay: "Adopting a four-day school week can significantly improve student engagement, academic performance, and overall well-being while also addressing concerns about cost and logistics."