Use the sentence to answer the question.
"Kayla writes the following claim: I think school should only be four days a week"
In one short sentence, explain why this claim needs to be revised. Then, write a claim about the topic that you could support with reasons in an argumentative essay
The claim needs to be revised because it is solely based on the writer's personal opinion without providing any supporting reasons or evidence.
Claim: Implementing a four-day school week can improve student attendance, reduce transportation costs, and enhance student academic performance.