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Across the sky blue, Gray clouds could be seen to the north. Yes, most certainly a storm was coming, and not to the enjoyment of any one. For it had only stopped that morning, and the people who had the booths out trying to sell things were getting very much annoyed. Firstly the rain yes the rain it ruined everything it would seem. For of course it left puddles, and each time a person ran in it, or children jumped in it, it would splash every were. And not to mention the horses who did the same.
Fixed version:
Across the blue sky, gray clouds could be seen in the north. Yes, undoubtedly a storm was approaching, much to the dismay of everyone. It had only ceased raining that morning, and the vendors who had set up booths to sell their wares were becoming increasingly irritated. The rain, of course, had ruined everything it seemed. Puddles had formed, and whenever someone ran through them or children jumped in them, water would splash all around. Not to mention the horses who also contributed to the mess.
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Across the blue sky, gray clouds could be seen in the north. Yes, undoubtedly a storm was approaching, much to the dismay of everyone. It had only ceased raining that morning, and the vendors who had set up booths to sell their wares were becoming increasingly irritated. The rain, of course, had ruined everything it seemed. Puddles had formed, and whenever someone ran through them or children jumped in them, water would splash all around. Not to mention the horses who also contributed to the mess. Now it only made things worse for it to rain ☔ for it it did rain there would be more water, and all people would be going in to the homes, save only the guards, and the men working would be out. How were these people ment to make a living. For when it rained all went in that made no one to buy from those poor venders, only know and the a wagon or two might pass though. Bugaboo is to say the will bu anthing.
Fixed version:
Across the blue sky, gray clouds could be seen in the north. Yes, undoubtedly a storm was approaching, much to the dismay of everyone. It had only stopped raining that morning, and the vendors who had set up booths to sell their wares were becoming increasingly irritated. The rain, of course, had ruined everything it seemed. Puddles had formed, and whenever someone ran through them or children jumped in them, water would splash everywhere. Not to mention the horses who also contributed to the mess. Now, it would only make things worse if it rained, as there would be even more water. Everyone would seek shelter in their homes, except for the guards and a few working men. How were these people meant to make a living? When it rained, everyone stayed indoors, leaving no one to buy from those poor vendors. Only now and then, a wagon or two might pass by, but it was doubtful they would buy anything.
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Across the blue sky, gray clouds could be seen in the north. Yes, undoubtedly a storm was approaching, much to the dismay of everyone. It had only stopped raining that morning, and the vendors who had set up booths to sell their wares were becoming increasingly irritated. The rain, of course, had ruined everything it seemed. Puddles had formed, and whenever someone ran through them or children jumped in them, water would splash everywhere. Not to mention the horses who also contributed to the mess. Now, it would only make things worse if it rained, as there would be even more water. Everyone would seek shelter in their homes, except for the guards and a few working men. How were these people meant to make a living? When it rained, everyone stayed indoors, leaving no one to buy from those poor vendors. Only now and then, a wagon or two might pass by, but it was doubtful they would buy anything. To add to there annoyance only half an hour before, the guards tried to arrest a vender for trying to steal. Poor man that vender was he took off fast knocking over people's booths, and stomping over fruits. Even knocking people down.
Fixed version:
Across the blue sky, gray clouds could be seen in the north. Undoubtedly, a storm was approaching, much to the dismay of everyone. It had only ceased raining that morning, and the vendors who had set up booths to sell their wares were growing increasingly irritated. The rain had, of course, ruined everything it seemed. Puddles had formed, and whenever someone ran through them or children jumped in them, water would splash everywhere. Not to mention the horses who also contributed to the mess. Now, it would only make things worse if it rained, as there would be even more water. Everyone would seek shelter in their homes, except for the guards and a few working men. How were these people meant to make a living? When it rained, everyone stayed indoors, leaving no one to buy from those poor vendors. Only occasionally, a wagon or two might pass by, but it was doubtful they would buy anything. To add to their annoyance, just half an hour before, the guards had tried to arrest a vendor for attempted theft. The poor man took off swiftly, knocking over people's booths, trampling over fruits, and even knocking people down in the process.
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Across the blue sky, gray clouds could be seen in the north. Undoubtedly, a storm was approaching, much to the dismay of everyone. It had only ceased raining that morning, and the vendors who had set up booths to sell their wares were growing increasingly irritated. The rain had, of course, ruined everything it seemed. Puddles had formed, and whenever someone ran through them or children jumped in them, water would splash everywhere. Not to mention the horses who also contributed to the mess. Now, it would only make things worse if it rained, as there would be even more water. Everyone would seek shelter in their homes, except for the guards and a few working men. How were these people meant to make a living? When it rained, everyone stayed indoors, leaving no one to buy from those poor vendors. Only occasionally, a wagon or two might pass by, but it was doubtful they would buy anything. To add to their annoyance, just half an hour before, the guards had tried to arrest a vendor for attempted theft. The poor man took off swiftly, knocking over people's booths, trampling over fruits, and even knocking people down in the process. It did come to the the amusement of some of the people who had bought from him before. For he had so was been unfair and stealing from them. The people who reported him were the kings son and a generals son, son. They were looked like any ordany, peasants. But the bad some guards standing a few feet away. The knew the vender loved to cheat people. So they decided to put an end to it. They laughed the whole time the guards tried to arrest him. Even when the generals son got knocked over.
Fixed version:
Across the blue sky, gray clouds could be seen in the north, indicating an approaching storm. This news brought dismay to everyone, especially the vendors who had set up their booths to sell their wares. The rain had only stopped that morning and had already caused significant damage. Puddles had formed, and every time someone ran or children jumped in them, water splashed everywhere. The horses only added to the mess. The prospect of more rain made the situation even worse, as it would create even more waterlogged conditions. Everyone, except for the guards and a few working men, would seek shelter in their homes. This left the vendors in a difficult position, wondering how they were supposed to make a living if no one ventured out to buy from them. Occasionally, a passing wagon or two might come by, but the likelihood of a purchase was doubtful.
To add to their frustration, just half an hour before, the guards had attempted to arrest a vendor for theft. The poor man swiftly fled, causing chaos in his wake. He knocked over people's booths, trampled over fruits, and even knocked some people down in the process. Some of the individuals who had previously been cheated by him found amusement in the situation. The ones responsible for reporting him happened to be the king's son and the son of a general. They may have appeared like ordinary peasants, but they had guards standing nearby who knew about the vendor's dishonest practices. It was their decision to put an end to his cheating ways. They laughed throughout the whole ordeal, even when the general's son was knocked over.