Make society curious about the further support provided by the government and the education system, such as family planning and accessing contraceptives. can you rate this sentence out of 10 and give me 10/10 version
Your sentence, as it stands, might be somewhat confusing regarding what you're asking the reader to become curious about. It blends the concepts of societal curiosity, government support, and the education system, which might make it difficult for the reader to understand the specific message or action being proposed. I’d rate it a 5/10 for clarity and effectiveness.
Here's a revised version that could be rated closer to a 10/10 for clarity and persuasion:
"Explore how enhanced government policies and educational programs can further empower families through comprehensive family planning resources and easier access to contraceptives."
This version clearly invites society to investigate or consider the benefits of improved government and educational efforts in providing family planning support. It also specifies what aspects of these efforts the reader should be curious about, such as "comprehensive resources" and "easier access to contraceptives."