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Hook: Grab the reader’s attention with an interesting statement (in your own words) about the general topic of the story.

Your hook should NOT be in the form of a question.

“Nethergrave” by Gloria Skurzynski

Hook: In the virtual world of "Nethergrave" created by Gloria Skurzynski, a gripping tale unfolds where a lonely teenager finds not just an escape from reality, but also a profound lesson about the consequences of seeking refuge in alternate realms.

make it look like a 4th grader wrote it...

Are you ready to dive into the amazing story of "Nethergrave" by Gloria Skurzynski? Get ready to be blown away by this super cool adventure where a kid named Jeremy finds this awesome virtual place called "Nethergrave." But hold on tight, because things get intense when Jeremy realizes that escaping into this virtual world isn't always the best idea. It's like a rollercoaster of emotions and lessons, all packed into one epic story!

dont start it witha question.

Are you ready for an incredible adventure in the virtual world of "Nethergrave" by Gloria Skurzynski? Get ready to be amazed as we follow Jeremy, a lonely teenager who discovers a magical place called "Nethergrave." But beware! This virtual world isn't as safe as it seems, and Jeremy will learn a valuable lesson about the dangers of escaping reality. Hold on tight, because this story is going to take you on a wild ride!

It should be 1 sentnce

In the exciting story of "Nethergrave" by Gloria Skurzynski, a lonely teenager discovers a virtual world called "Nethergrave," but soon learns the important lesson about the consequences of seeking refuge in alternate realms.