Use the letter to answer the prompt. Dear Editor, I am writing because your article on the new school cafeteria was horrible and your reporter doesn't know anything. The article said that the new cafeteria will be a waste of money, and it is wrong. Our cafeteria doesn't have enough room, it smells bad, the walls are dirty, and it takes too long to get through the line. How do you expect us to learn when our lunches are gross? You need to correct your article and send your reporter to interview people who really matter, like me! Sincerely, Karrina Sweet Revise the letter in 3–5 sentences so that it uses precise language that is appropriate for the domain. (4 points)
Dear Editor, I am writing to express my disappointment with your article about the new school cafeteria. The article's assertion that the new cafeteria is a waste of money is unfounded. Our cafeteria, due to its limited space, foul odor, unclean walls, and slow service, greatly hampers our learning experience. It would be beneficial if your reporter were to interview individuals who are directly affected, such as myself. Sincerely, Karrina Sweet
Dear Editor,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recent article on the new school cafeteria. The article falsely claims that the cafeteria will be a waste of money. However, it fails to acknowledge the pressing issues we face, such as limited space, unpleasant odors, dirty walls, and slow service. These factors significantly impact our ability to concentrate and learn. I urge you to rectify this misrepresentation by assigning your reporter to interview individuals, like myself, who can provide valuable insights.
Sincerely,
Karrina Sweet