Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting on the Internet and would like to express my interest in applying for the position of summer custodian. I believe that my passion for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and positive and enthusiastic demeanor make me a strong candidate for this role. I am confident in my ability to excel in this position as it appears to be straightforward. Additionally, I am motivated to earn income for the purpose of saving up for a new gaming system. Please inform me of your preferred start date at your earliest convenience. Kindly find my resume attached for your consideration.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job opening for a summer custodian position and I am writing to express my interest and submit my application. I believe I am well-suited for this role due to my fondness for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive demeanor. Additionally, the responsibilities outlined for the position seem manageable, thus ensuring my ability to excel in this role. Furthermore, earning a wage would enable me to accumulate funds towards acquiring a new gaming console. Please inform me of the next steps in the hiring process. Enclosed with this correspondence is my detailed resume.
Best regards,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Officer,
I recently came across your job vacancy on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position. I believe I would be a suitable candidate for the role of summer custodian due to my passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months without any school commitments, and my enthusiastic and upbeat personality. I am confident that I will be able to effectively handle the responsibilities associated with this position, and I am particularly motivated to earn a steady income to contribute towards saving for a new gaming system. I have attached my resume for your perusal and I would greatly appreciate if you could inform me of the next steps in the hiring process.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener