can i tell you about my comic
Of course! I would love to hear about your comic. Please tell me all about it.
so there is a boy named isere lateley he has been able to use power such as portals aura at his feet to fly with and to stop time or slow time now for some reason his older self takes him to the future to deal with the enemy in the future which is like a god isere does not know what he has instore until the follwing chapters
That sounds like a fascinating concept for a comic! I love the idea of Isere discovering and harnessing his powers, especially the ability to manipulate time and use portals. It must be quite a thrilling journey when his older self takes him to the future to confront a powerful enemy.
I'm intrigued by the anticipation of what awaits Isere in the following chapters. It sounds like there will be plenty of action, surprises, and character development along the way. I'm curious to know more about this god-like enemy and how Isere will face them.
If you have any specific plot points, character details, or themes you'd like to share about your comic, I'd be happy to hear more.
well i will tell you more about the older version of isere and the normal version of isere but for now can you tell me what needs improvement
Certainly! Without knowing specific details about your comic, it's a bit difficult to provide precise suggestions. However, here are a few general aspects that you may consider for improvement:
1. Character Development: Ensure that your characters have depth, distinct personalities, and relatable motivations. Explore their pasts, fears, and desires to make them more engaging for readers.
2. World Building: Create a rich and immersive world for your story. Consider developing the rules and limitations of the powers your characters possess, the history of the universe they exist in, and any unique cultural or societal aspects that may contribute to the plot.
3. Plot Structure: Make sure your story has a clear structure and pacing. Introduce conflicts and obstacles that your protagonist must overcome, while maintaining a coherent plot progression.
4. Dialogue: Ensure that your characters' dialogue feels natural and authentic. Each character should have their own distinct voice, and the conversations should contribute to the story's development.
5. Artistic Presentation: Pay attention to the visual aspect of your comic. Ensure that your illustrations effectively convey the emotions, actions, and environments of the story. Consistency in art style and quality is crucial for an enjoyable reading experience.
Remember, these suggestions are general and may not apply specifically to your comic. It's always a good idea to gather feedback from readers and other creators to further refine and improve your work.
ok now i will tell you about older isere from the future and present isere :D
That sounds great! I'm excited to learn more about the older version of Isere from the future and his dynamic with the present Isere. Please go ahead and share the details.
so older isere for some reason has brown hair he explains his hair is brown because of when he past through the portal for some reason he changed in some ways younger version of isere has black hair and is amazed by what the future looks like nothing looks futureistic yet until they get to the base which to be told in the 2nd chapter
That's an interesting contrast between the older and younger versions of Isere! It's intriguing that the older Isere's physical appearance has changed, specifically his hair color, due to his experiences traveling through the portal. I'm curious to know how this transformation will affect his abilities or perception of himself.
It also sounds exciting that the future setting initially doesn't appear futuristic to the younger Isere. It creates a sense of mystery and builds anticipation for the reveal of the futuristic elements in the upcoming second chapter, particularly in the base they visit.
As the story progresses, I imagine there will be opportunities for the two versions of Isere to learn from each other, face challenges together, and potentially create a unique bond. Exploring their similarities and differences can add depth to their relationship and make for engaging character development.
I look forward to finding out more about the base and how it connects to the overall plot in the next chapter. If there are any specific details or themes you'd like to share about the interaction between the two versions of Isere, I'd be happy to hear more.