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Homework Help: English Proofread

Posted by Molly on Wednesday, March 25, 2009 at 8:40pm.

Can you please read my first paragraph for my cover letter. The writer had to identify self and purpose in the 1st paragraph. Can you please give me feedback and check my grammar? Thank you help is greatly appreciated

Your advertisement for any entry-level position as an assistant advisor,
on careerbuilder caught my attention instantaneously,when I was searching for hiring positions of interest. My background qualifies me for this job position. Please take into account my application while making your final decision. I am a first year college student with experience in a day care center as well as in parks and recreation for teenage children.

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