Thank you very much. I left out the following sentences.
1) I like everything in (of) the place where I live.
My town is famous for its wines and truffles among other things.
2) There are a lot of sports facilities:tennis courts, a football pitch (ground?) and two outdoor and an indoor swimming pools.
3) There aren't many shops so I always go to the town centre when I need to buy something.
4) My village was the field of some battles during the Second World War.
In the past there were a baker's shop, a restaurant and a garden shop (??)
5)Most people are involved (?) in the grape harvest in September.My village is a thirty-minute drive from (or TO?) Milan.
&) You always have something to do, like going to the fun fair. I can hear the birds singing and on sunny days I can see the mountains.
1) I like everything about the place where I live.
My town is famous for its wines and truffles, among other things.
2) There are many sports facilities: tennis courts and a football field, as well as two outdoor and one indoor swimming pools.
3) There aren't many shops, so I always go to the town centre when I need to buy something.
4) My village was the scene of some battles during the Second World War.
In the past, there were a baker's shop, a restaurant, and a garden shop.
(You can substitute "nursery" for "garden shop" if you wish.)
5)Most people are involved in the grape harvest in September. My village is a thirty-minute drive from Milan.
&) You always have something to do, like going to the fun fair. I can hear the birds singing, and on sunny days I can see the mountains.