can someone help me turn this paragraph so it can sound like a personal narrative,
A week has passed since the dog left. We haven’t heard good or bad news of him. Every day since he left we would be looking in the nearby parks and around the block. One day I saw a dog that looked like our dog from the back but once we saw him from the front it wasn’t him. I was losing my hopes of finding this dumb dog
To turn the paragraph into a personal narrative, you can focus on sharing your own experiences and emotions. Here's a revised version:
It has been a full week since our beloved dog disappeared without a trace. Throughout these uncertain days, we've anxiously awaited any news about his whereabouts, hoping for a glimmer of good news. Every single day since his disappearance, we'd dedicate our time to scouring nearby parks and thoroughly searching every nook and cranny around our neighborhood. Just yesterday, a spark of hope ignited within me when I glimpsed a dog from afar that bore a striking resemblance to our furry friend. My heart skipped a beat as I eagerly approached, but alas, once we locked eyes, it became painfully clear that it wasn't him. Disappointment washed over me, and my hopes for finding our dear, elusive pup began to dwindle.