what does it mean when ur teacher says include a revised and proofread copy
IT means make the changes,and PROOFREAD it before you turn it in.
You would be amazed at the number of students who turn things in without checking it themselves.
oh k i thought it meant a rough copy
If nobody is available to proofread your work, you can do this yourself. After writing your material, put it aside for a day — at least several hours. (This breaks mental sets you might have that keep you from noticing problems.) Then read it aloud as if you were reading someone else's work. (Reading aloud slows down your reading, so you are less likely to skip over problems.)
If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other persons are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.
Another option, if it is available on your computer, is to have the computer read it to you.
Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.
I hope this helps a little more.
When your teacher asks you to include a revised and proofread copy, it means that they want you to submit a version of your work that has been carefully reviewed and improved.
To revise your work, you need to go through it and make changes to improve its clarity, coherence, and effectiveness. This can involve reorganizing your ideas, improving sentence structure, and making sure your arguments are logical. You can also check for any repetition or unnecessary information and remove or rephrase it.
Proofreading, on the other hand, means checking your revised work for errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, and formatting. You should read your work carefully, word by word, to catch any mistakes that may have been missed during the revision process. It can be helpful to read your work out loud or use software that checks for grammar and spelling errors.
Ultimately, including a revised and proofread copy demonstrates to your teacher that you have put in the effort to improve the quality of your work and have taken the time to correct any mistakes. It shows that you have taken the task seriously and have taken steps to ensure your work is clear, coherent, and error-free.