Question

The child held on to his mother as the train went by the platform. Revise the sentence by making the underlined words more precise, adding at least one adjective or adverb, and adding at least one sensory detail.

the underlined words are child, held, on, train, went

Answer 1

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

The timid child clung tightly to his mother's hand as the loud, roaring train raced past the crowded platform, causing a gust of wind to whip around them.