Yasser was standing nervously holding at the ball as he walked up to the boys and ask OK if I play the boys stopped and looked oh it’s jazzer from our math class said one of the boys he’s OK. The boy said he can play with us come on what is one thing that is missing from this conclusion is it that it does not follow the story logically There are loose ends to the story. The conflict is not resolved, or it does not show how the character has grown.
One thing missing from this conclusion is that it does not show how Yasser overcame his nerves and gained confidence in playing with the boys. There is no resolution to the initial conflict of Yasser feeling nervous, and it does not demonstrate any growth or development in his character. It would be more impactful if the conclusion included a scene showing Yasser conquering his nerves and enjoying playing with the boys, showing his growth and development as a character.
