imagine how the story "Home" By Gwendolyn Brooks would be different if it were told from the point of view of the character, Papa.Using the information from the passage, rewrite the ending of the story starting from when Papa walks home (Paragraph 17).ake sure that you provide dialogue from the characters (Papa, Mama, Maud Martha, or Helen), and use sensory details and language to capture the action of the story.
The sun had already set as Papa made his way back home. His mind was filled with thoughts of his family and the news he had to share. As he approached the house, he could see Mama sitting on the porch, her face illuminated by the soft glow of the porch light.
"Papa, you're back! What news do you have for us?" Mama asked eagerly as she stood up to greet him.
Papa smiled and took Mama's hand in his own. "I have wonderful news, my love. I have secured a new job, one that will provide for our family and allow us to live comfortably once again."
Mama's eyes widened with delight and relief. "Oh, Papa, that's wonderful news! I knew you would find a way to take care of us."
Papa squeezed Mama's hand gently before turning to Maud Martha and Helen, who had come out to see what the commotion was about. "Girls, we have a reason to celebrate tonight. Your Papa has found a new job, and we can finally start building our home again."
Maud Martha and Helen squealed with joy, hugging their parents tightly. The sound of laughter filled the air as the family stood together on the porch, basking in the warmth of their love and newfound hope.
As they all went inside to celebrate, Papa couldn't help but feel grateful for his family and the strength they gave him. With their support, he knew they could overcome any challenge that came their way. And as they sat around the dinner table, sharing stories and laughter, Papa knew that no matter where they were, as long as they were together, they were home.
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how can i make this narrative a minimum of 300 words??
The sun had already set as Papa made his way back home. He couldn't wait to share the wonderful new he had. Approaching the house, he could see Mama, Maud Martha and Helen eagerly waiting for the news. "Hello," Papa said."Papa, you're back! What'd they say? " Mama asked as she stood up to greet him. Papa walks into their house, Mama follows. Helen and Maud Martha stayed behind. Papa smiled and took Mama's hand. "I have wonderful news! The people at the office gave me another extension!" Papa said. Mama's eyes widened with excitement and relief. "Thats not all. I have secured a new job, one that will provide for us. It allows us to live comfortably once more." "Oh, Papa, that's wonderful news! " Mama said. Hey returned to Maud Martha and Helen, who had come out to see what the commotion was about. "Girls, we have a reason to celebrate tonight. Your Papa has found a new job, and we can finally start building our home again." Said Mama. Maud Martha and Helen squealed with joy, hugging their parents tightly. The sound of laughter filled the air as the family stood together on the porch, basking in the warmth of their love and new hope. As they all went inside to celebrate, Papa couldn't help but feel grateful for his family and the strength they gave him. With their support, he knew they could overcome any challenge that came their way. And as they sat around the dinner table, sharing stories and laughter, Papa knew that no matter where they were, as long as they were together, they were home.
Expanded to 300 words:
The sun had already set as Papa made his way back home, the weight of his news weighing heavily on his mind. Each step felt longer with anticipation as he neared their humble abode. As he approached the house, the warm glow of the porch light illuminated Mama, Maud Martha, and Helen eagerly waiting for him, their faces filled with a mix of curiosity and hope.
"Hello," Papa greeted as he reached the porch, his heart swelling with love for his family.
"Papa, you're back! What'd they say?" Mama's voice was a mix of excitement and nervousness as she stood up to greet him, her eyes searching his face for any signs of what was to come.
Papa walked into the house, Mama following closely behind. Helen and Maud Martha stayed behind on the porch, their eyes wide with anticipation. Taking Mama's hand in his, Papa couldn't contain the joy that was brimming inside him.
"I have wonderful news! The people at the office granted me another extension!" Papa's voice was filled with relief and gratitude, the weight of uncertainty now lifted off his shoulders.
But that wasn't all. With a smile that reached his eyes, Papa continued, "I have also secured a new job, one that will provide for us. It allows us to live comfortably once more."
Mama's eyes widened in surprise and delight at the news. "Oh, Papa, that's wonderful news!" she exclaimed, her voice filled with gratitude and hope.
Returning to the porch, where Maud Martha and Helen were waiting with bated breath, Mama shared the joyous news. Their collective cheers and hugs filled the air with warmth and love, solidifying the bond that held them together through thick and thin.
As they all went inside to celebrate, the house echoed with laughter and chatter, the sounds of joy and relief mingling into a sweet melody of family togetherness. Papa, surrounded by his loved ones, felt a deep sense of gratitude for their unwavering support, knowing that no matter where life took them, as long as they were together, they were truly home.