Sara liked to boast to her cousins who lived in another state that she lived in Miami Florida and the weather was better.

Question

Sara liked to boast to her cousins who lived in another state that she lived in Miami Florida and the weather was better.

Use the SLEDD strategy and in 2 or more sentences rewrite from the cousin's point of view.

SL = sensory language

E-don't change the events

D = details

D= dialogue

Answer 1

From her cousin's point of view, Sara always talked about how the sun in Miami felt warm against her skin and how the ocean breeze smelled like salt and sunshine. She described the palm trees swaying in the wind and the sound of seagulls in the distance, making them wish they were there with her.