Should all schools provide education in the arts, including music, art, and drama?
Body Paragraph #3
(Counterclaim/Rebuttal):
A. Address counterclaim (one-two sentences about the opposing viewpoint, “Some people think that…”):
B. Evidence/support for counterclaim (one-three sentences with evidence about the counterclaim. Remember to include a parenthetical/in-text citation using the parenthetical/in-text citations linked here):
C. Disprove counterclaim (one-three sentences of why the counterclaim is wrong- “However, they are wrong because…”):
D. Transition to next paragraph (one sentence, briefly transition to the conclusion): Expression art also has the potential to deeply resonate with viewers.
Conclusion
A. Summarize your claim (one-two sentences- reword your claim from your introduction):
B. Summary of reason #1 and reason #2 (two or more sentences that restate what you discussed in your first two body paragraphs):
C. Closing statement/final thought (one sentence that wraps up your paper; what do people need to remember to do?):
B. Evidence/support for counterclaim: Some people argue that schools should focus primarily on core subjects, such as math and science, in order to prepare students for standardized tests and future careers. They believe that arts education is a luxury that schools cannot afford to prioritize.
C. Disprove counterclaim: However, they are wrong because studies have shown that arts education can actually improve academic performance in other subjects. For example, a study by the Arts Education Partnership found that students who participate in the arts are more likely to excel in math and reading. Additionally, the skills learned through arts education, such as creativity, critical thinking, and collaboration, are essential for success in any career, not just those in the arts.
D. Transition to next paragraph: Expression art also has the potential to deeply resonate with viewers.
Conclusion
A. Summarize your claim: All schools should provide education in the arts, including music, art, and drama, as it has been shown to improve academic performance and develop essential skills for success in any career.
B. Summary of reason #1 and reason #2: By providing education in the arts, schools can help students excel in other subjects and develop important skills like creativity and critical thinking that are necessary for success in the future.
C. Closing statement/final thought: It is essential for schools to prioritize arts education in order to fully educate and prepare students for the challenges and opportunities they will face in the future.