The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.
In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid.
150 word limit and make it sound like a fifth grader wrote it
"Hey, you go first!" whispered Alex, nudging Lily forward.
"No way, you go first!" Lily objected, poking Alex in the arm.
"Come on, don't be a chicken!" Alex teased.
"I'm not a chicken, you are!" Lily shot back, trying to push Alex into the cave.
Suddenly, a soft voice echoed from inside, "Who's there?" causing both children to jump back in surprise.