In three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events.(4 points)
As the sun began to set behind the tall mountains, Sarah made her way through the dense forest, her heartbeat quickening with every step. Finally, she reached the clearing where the ancient ruins lay hidden, their crumbling stones covered in moss. Several hours had passed since she had started her journey, but now she knew she was closer to uncovering the long-lost secrets of this mysterious place. With determination in her eyes, Sarah took a deep breath and entered the ruins, ready to explore their secrets.
3 sentences, different names
As dusk settled over the sleepy town of Willow Creek, James sat on the porch of his quaint little cottage, enjoying the cool evening breeze. Meanwhile, across the street, Sophia was busy tending to her colorful garden, the vibrant flowers blooming under her care. In the distance, the sound of laughter could be heard as David and his friends played a friendly game of soccer in the park.
2 sentences
Emily walked along the sandy beach, the gentle waves lapping at her feet as she searched for seashells. Sam watched from a distance, admiring her beauty and feeling grateful to have her in his life.
