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In the story "From Behind the Veil" by Dhu’l Nun Ayyoub, Siham says, "I don’t want any man who sees me to remember the color of my eyes or the shape of my lips" (Abu-Lughod 859). This is a positive feeling that she likes the veil because it hides her eye color and lips enough for her to believe people won't remember them. I think she also likes the Veil because she feels like she won't get any unwanted attention from men.

In the text "From Behind the Veil" by Dhu’l Nun Ayyoub, Siham expresses a preference for anonymity by stating, "I don’t want any man who sees me to recall the color of my eyes or the shape of my lips" (Abu-Lughod 859). This suggests that she finds comfort in the veil's ability to conceal defining features, allowing her to blend in and avoid unwanted male attention.