n three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events.

Question

could you write this like a 12 year old but keep it formal

Answer 1

Once upon a time, in a small town, there lived a group of friends who loved to play together at the park. One sunny afternoon, they decided to have a picnic under a big oak tree. After eating sandwiches and drinking lemonade, they raced each other around the playground until the sun began to set and it was time to go home.