Problem: The city took back their promise to build a park in Barrio Logan.

Solution: The people of Barrio Logan took over the land for 12 days, blocked work crews, and stood in front of bulldozers until the city agreed to build Chicano Park.

REWRITE

Solution: In response to the city reneging on their promise to build a park in Barrio Logan, the community residents took matters into their own hands. They occupied the land for 12 days, prevented work crews from entering, and even stood in front of bulldozers until the city agreed to follow through on their commitment to build Chicano Park.