Joachim always had a hard time falling asleep, and tonight was no different. (“When that didn’t work, he heated up some milk in the kitchen “) Where is the best place for this sentence in the paragraph in order to keep a logical sequence of events?
The best place for this sentence in the paragraph to keep a logical sequence of events would be at the end. Here is the revised paragraph:
"Joachim always had a hard time falling asleep, and tonight was no different. When that didn’t work, he heated up some milk in the kitchen to help him relax and drift off to sleep."