DAY 1 (Unit 8, Lesson 10)
Choose a topic from the list below:
A dull trip that became and adventure due to a wrong turn
How a pair of enemies joined forces to help someone
A family heirloom that brought each generation good fortune
How a student visiting a nursing home unexpectedly met a hero
The true story of an event from your own life that changed your perspective in some way
Brainstorm information about key story elements based on your topic:
Purpose - What is your purpose for writing? (Most likely to entertain)
Audience - Who are your writing for? (Think beyond your teacher and your school)
Characters - Who is the protagonist? Who is the antagonist? Who are the supporting characters and how do they interact with each other? ***Dialogue is a requirement on this portfolio!
Setting - What is the geographical setting? What is the time period?
Problem - What problem are your characters trying to solve? What is the conflict in the story?
Theme - What is the universal message or lesson to be learned from the story?
DAY 2 (Unit 8, Lesson 11)
Use your brainstorming from yesterday to draft a narrative on your topic.
Your essay should be TYPED and 1-2 pages long. Your narrative must include all four story elements (character, setting, problem/conflict, and theme). Think about word choice and how you can tell your story in the most effective way. Don't forget to include dialogue!
After drafting your essay, now you should revise to improve your writing. Use the checklist below to make revisions if needed:
Story Elements
Are the main characters and setting described well enough?
Do the characters act in consistent and believable ways?
Is the conflict, or the main problem of the story, set up clearly enough? Is it resolved in some way?
Are the main events of the story included? Are there any irrelevant events that need to be removed?
Do the events of the story follow logically from each other?
Conventions
Did I use the correct word choice?
Are my sentences grammatically correct?
Have I written any run-on sentences or fragments?
Have I spelled all my words correctly?
Did I use the correct capitalization and punctuation?
DAY 3 (Unit 8, Lesson 12)
You should have a polished draft - way to go! Now you should make a final copy of your narrative. Consider the items below for your final draft:
Does my narrative have a unique and creative title?
Do I want to create a cover page for my narrative?
Do I want to include any images along with my narrative?
Now you should make sure your final essay suits your audience and purpose. You may need to make some final revisions to ensure that you are communicating information well. Use the checklist below to make any final revisions if needed:
Purpose
Does my essay fulfill my purpose? Will it entertain my reader?
Are my characters interesting? Is my plot comprehensible and logical?
If my story teaches a lesson, is that lesson clear?
Audience
What kinds of stories does my audience prefer? Will my audience enjoy what I wrote?
Can my audience “see” what I am describing? Did I use language that appeals to the senses and paints a mental picture for my readers? Are my verbs powerful and meaningful?
Will my audience be able to relate to the characters in my story and imagine themselves in the situation I have presented?
Now your final essay should be ready to turn in. Review the Rubric on the next page to make sure you have met all of the Portfolio expectations.
Submit your essay in the dropbox in Unit 8, Lesson 12.
Remember to take your time and carefully review your work before submitting. Good luck!
no, im asking you to do this for me!!
I'm sorry for any confusion. Here is a narrative based on the topic "A dull trip that became an adventure due to a wrong turn":
Title: The Wrong Turn
Once upon a time, there were two best friends, Lucy and Sarah, who decided to go on a road trip during their summer vacation. They were both excited to explore new places and create unforgettable memories together. Little did they know that a simple wrong turn would turn their dull trip into an exciting adventure.
The purpose of this narrative is to entertain the reader and spark their sense of adventure. The audience for this story is young adults who enjoy stories about friendship, travel, and unexpected twists.
The protagonist of the story is Lucy, a fun-loving and spontaneous girl who always seeks out new experiences. The antagonist could be considered the wrong turn they took, leading them off their intended path. The supporting characters include Sarah, who is more cautious and practical, and the friendly locals they encounter on their unplanned journey. The dialogue between Lucy and Sarah showcases their contrasting personalities as they navigate through challenges together.
The geographical setting is a small town in the countryside, surrounded by lush greenery and winding roads. The time period is modern-day, with smartphones and GPS technology to assist their travels. The problem the characters are trying to solve is finding their way back to their original route while facing unexpected obstacles along the way.
The theme of this story is about embracing the unexpected and making the best out of a challenging situation. It teaches readers to be open to new experiences and to cherish the moments of spontaneity that life throws their way.
Overall, this narrative captures the essence of adventure, friendship, and the thrill of exploring the unknown. Through vivid descriptions and engaging dialogue, it takes the reader on a journey of unexpected twists and turns, showing how a simple wrong turn can lead to unforgettable memories and bonding experiences.
I hope this narrative helps guide you in creating your own story. Let me know if you need any more assistance!
okay, now write the whole story
I'm glad you enjoyed the outline! Here is the full narrative based on the outline provided:
Title: The Wrong Turn
Lucy and Sarah had been best friends since they were little. They had always shared a love for adventure and exploration, so when summer vacation rolled around, they decided to embark on a road trip together. Packed with snacks, a map, and a sense of excitement, they set off in Lucy's old, reliable car.
Their destination was a charming seaside town that they had heard about from a friend. The plan was to take scenic routes, stop at interesting landmarks, and immerse themselves in the beauty of the countryside. Everything was going according to plan until they reached a fork in the road that seemed unfamiliar.
"I think we're supposed to go left here," Lucy said, consulting the map.
Sarah, who was more cautious by nature, hesitated. "Are you sure? This road looks a bit rough. Maybe we should stick to the main route."
But Lucy, always eager for a detour, decided to take the left turn. Little did they know that this simple decision would lead them on a wild, unexpected adventure.
As they drove further down the road, the scenery started to change. Lush forests surrounded them, and the road twisted and turned unpredictably. Signs became scarce, and the GPS signal faded away. They were officially lost.
Despite the initial panic, Lucy and Sarah found themselves laughing and enjoying the unplanned journey. They stopped at a quaint village and met friendly locals who directed them towards hidden gems off the beaten path. They hiked through breathtaking landscapes, stumbled upon hidden waterfalls, and even camped under the stars by a serene lake.
Throughout their misadventure, Lucy and Sarah's friendship was tested and strengthened. Lucy's spontaneity and Sarah's practicality complemented each other perfectly, and together they navigated through challenges with humor and resilience.
Eventually, after a few wrong turns and detours, they managed to find their way back to the main road. The seaside town they had originally planned to visit was still waiting for them, but now they returned as changed individuals. The wrong turn had turned their dull trip into an unforgettable adventure, filled with unexpected experiences and cherished memories.
As they drove back home, Lucy and Sarah reflected on their journey. They realized that sometimes, taking a wrong turn in life could lead to the most incredible discoveries. They learned to embrace the unknown, cherish the present moment, and savor the beauty of the unexpected.
And so, their road trip came to an end, but the memories they created and the bond they shared would last a lifetime. The wrong turn had led them on a path of adventure, friendship, and self-discovery, proving that sometimes, getting lost is the best way to find yourself.
I hope you enjoy this story! Let me know if you need any more assistance.