i have a little cousin who is crazy but i live him soooo one of my freind has anoiyd by him and told him "Stop acting like a todiler if you keep acting like that you just need go to the todiler class!!!!" i thought that was very rude but also true. so maybe if he wouldve used more connotative type words he might have got the messge acrose to my cousin without being rude.

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i have a little cousin who is crazy but i live him soooo one of my freind has anoiyd by him and told him "Stop acting like a todiler if you keep acting like that you just need go to the todiler class!!!!" i thought that was very rude but also true. so maybe if he wouldve used more connotative type words he might have got the messge acrose to my cousin without being rude.

can you make this into a good paragragh Reminder: A RACE paragraph is 5 to 7 sentences or more with correct grammar and conventions (capitalization, spelling, and punctuation). You need to RESTATE the question and ANSWER it, CITE EVIDENCE, and EXPLAIN how that evidence supports your answer.

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I have a young cousin who can be a bit wild at times, but I still love him dearly. Recently, a friend of mine became annoyed by his behavior and sharply told him to stop acting like a toddler. While the message was somewhat true, I couldn't help but feel that it was incredibly rude. I believe that using more connotative language could have effectively conveyed the same message without being offensive. By choosing kinder words and tone, my friend could have potentially gotten through to my cousin in a more respectful manner. In the future, I hope that we can all remember to communicate with patience and kindness, even in moments of frustration.